posted 07-09-2015 04:51 PM ET (US)
Many thanks for the synopsis of the video. But you left out a lot.First, there is about 45-seconds of a presenter explaining that what you are about to see was some story they tried to show you previously but could not due to a technical difficulty. I don't need to know any of that. Throw out the first 45-seconds of the video. This fits perfectly with THE WADSWORTH CONSTANT.
The Wadsworth Constant is an axiom which states that the first 30% of any video can be skipped because it contains no worthwhile or interesting information.
The next segment is a voice-over narration by someone laying out the story line to be told
Then we have a jarring change in voice. A new voice takes over the voice-over narration. This is an awful method of presentation. It is reasonable to have an unseen narrator in a film presentation, but it is not reasonable to suddenly change to a new, unseen narrator, and have no idea who is talking. Whoever edited this presentation apparently never went to film school or studied much about the technique of motion picture story telling.
Finally we met the actual person, the guy who was thrown from his boat. He starts to tell parts of the story. Then we get some rapid cutting montages with fuzzy images, intended to represent visually the concept of being thrown out of the boat. I get that notion without having to see these images. I can comprehend what it is like to go from the boat to the water. Next, we get some very quick cuts--flash frames--of a body badly lacerated by the propeller.
In terms of representing the trauma and pain of being thrown overboard and run over by your own boat's propeller, the images created for the video are not very effective. The most effective images are the actual footage of the guy's back and buttocks, and the description of the wounds by the physician that treated them. Throw out all those shaky, out-of-focus, quick pan-zoom shots.
The worst of the injuries are actually not shown. They are blurred out. If you want to have an effect on people about how seriously they can be hurt by their boat propeller, it might be better to leave the really bad injuries in the presentation, not blur them out.
Really, I like Gary's synopsis the best. A guy takes his hands off the wheel, is thrown out of his boat, and the boat runs him over. The only part I would add is to mention the boat was going 55-MPH when he took his hands off the wheel. I am going to add it to his initial article.
I would not normally go on about the video, but Gary introduced this topic in his first article. He said, "It is a great video." In my mind, that makes the video a topic for discussion.